[Final Assignment] Outline of Writing Assignment

Title                             :  The qualities of good employees.

Topic Sentence            : An employer looks for employees with certain qualities.

Topic                           : An employer.

Controlling idea          : Looks for employees with certain qualities.

Major supporting sentence 1

He or she must have a skill in IT.
Minor supporting sentence 1
The works that must be use a computer could be finished.
Efficiency of time when do the work, because with computer the works will be easier to be done, especially to make company’s documents.

Major supporting sentence 2

He or she must have a good public speaking skill.

Minor supporting sentence 2
The employees will be able to promote their selves or their company in the global world.
Can satisfy the costumers with a good service.

Major supporting sentence 3

He or she could be work together or in group.

Minor supporting sentence 3
Can make the works easier or faster to be done.
They can build a good relationship between employees.
The goal of the company will be easier to be reached.

Concluding sentence:

In short, with those requirements the employees will be good employees and could be a useful for company. 

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Group members:

I Putu Adhi Wirayasa             (1212021044)

Gusti Ngurah Edy Suryanata  (1212021053)

Daily activities at FBS’s lobby

The FBS’s lobby is always full of activities which make it very crowded. It’s so crowded because of the students’ activities and the administrative business of the campus itself. Besides that many students use the Lobby as the place to do their assignments. They use the Lobby’s Wi-Fi connections to find entertainments or to do their assignments. It’s common to see the students playing games or watching movies every day at the lobby and they’re also laughs and yells loudly to the extent that they disturb the other people. Many students formed groups while recharging their gadgets or when they doing their assignments but they pay no attention about their surroundings so the wires are everywhere. Students who doing their assignments prefers to sit on the floor it’s because of limited number of seats available. And while they do their assignment usually they also have snacks and they don’t throw away their rubbish in the rubbish bin. They just throw their rubbish or leaving many things behind, so it makes the Dean, the lecturers and the staff angry. Because of the limited number of seats, some people just sitting on the floor and it disturb the other people who want to pass by. In short, the FBS’s Lobby is always crowded because there are so many activities take place there, it’s usually used by the students to do their assignments  and to do another various things, but because of our own actions the lobby turn into a messy place where rubbish scattered up over here and there. It makes us feel uncomfortable and makes the Dean, the lecturers and other staffs angry. We need to pay more respect to our facility so we will not get any problem when we used it. We need to be more careful about our actions so that people will feel more comfortable when they entered the lobby.  After all, the FBS’s Lobby is ours. So it’s our duty and responsibilities to take care of it.

Share the Happiness with Hugs [FINAL FREE HUG CAMPAIGN]

There was a man holding a sign about offering free hugs for everyone. He was walking in the downtown and offering free hugs for everyone. But at the beginning, some people tried to keep a distance with him because people might think that he was insane or else. But the situation was changed when an elder woman came to him and asked to get a hug from him and the man was hugging old woman gladly. Many people paid an attention to the man when he was hugging the old woman, and after that some people wanted to get a free hugs from the man too. Everybody whether male, female, old and young wanted to get a free hug from the man and that was so sweet. When the man was carrying out his activities, The campaign "Free Hugs" was banned by the police. The man tried to explain what was the purpose of the campaign. After that, the police allowed him to continue his campaign and the other people started to do the same. They give a free hugs to everyone and during the campaign, the man give a signature list to the people who wanted to get a free hug and supported this campaign. Finally, the target of signature was reached. Ten thousand signatures was reached by the man and then to celebrate the success of his action, many people give free hugs and then hug each other. That was so sweet because the man wants to tell us that it's important to share and the happiness to the other people and also respect to each other. At last, this campaign was so great and of course it was so sweet.

Here is the link for the video. Please enjoy.

Free Hugs Campaign

Outline of Sukma’s post entitled “Free Hugs = Share Love NOT Drugs”

1. Topic sentence            :  There was a man with a black coat walking in the crowd.

2.         Major supporting sentence 1:

·         The man who wears that round spectacle walked alone and brought a sign with him

-          Minor supporting sentences:

·         “Free Hugs” was the words which was written in that white board.

            (I think it should be “Words which were” not “words which was”)

            Major supporting sentence 2:

·         At the beginning, everybody thought that he was crazy or under a medical treatment.

-          Minor supporting sentences:

·         There’s no one noticed him.

Major supporting sentence 3:

·         But, the condition was changed when an old lady started to hug him.

-          Minor supporting sentences:

·         The man who brought the sign suddenly gave his hug to her.

·         After that, he was started to give his hug to anybody else.

·         This is a very touching moment when everybody started to share their love by hugging somebody else.

            Major supporting sentence 4:

·         But, this action seemed a bit out of the law by the police.

-          Minor supporting sentences:

·         So, they banned this action.

            Major supporting sentence 5:

·         The thing wasn’t like that.

-          Minor supporting sentences:

·         The way to make the police believe was by writing a petition.

·         It was supported by the people, it showed when the people started to sign the petition.

(I think it can be separated into 2 sentences to make it sounds more natural)

·         There were a lot of people agree and support this action

·         Because of that, the police couldn’t say anything.

3. Concluding sentence:

            I can learn many things from this video. We may not underestimate somebody who we don’t know yet. Whether he or she has long/short hair, bad clothing, we have to respect each other. The main point is to share our love to other people. By hugging someone else we have shared our love and spread a positive feelings to others.

(At the last sentence, “a positive feelings” I think it should be like this “positive feelings” or “a positive feeling”.)

Gaming Room for a Gamer

I love play games. Game is one of my favorite things because by playing game, I can entertain myself. If I have a free time, I usually spent it for playing my favorite game. Online game or offline game, I love both of them and I always spend my time in my room when I play a game. So, with that reason, I want to have a gaming room for myself. I want to have a room that can make me feel comfort when I play a game and also with a lot of game's stuffs and a good computer to play my games. Here is the picture of a gamer room that i want to have.

There are a lot of things that I want to have in my gaming room and I want to placed them with a good organized so that it can be the most comfortable place for me. First, I will place two computer desk on the corner of the room. The second desk is on the right of the room and the main desk is on the left of the second desk, so it looks like the letter L and it will make the room looks tidy. On the main desk, I will put three wide computer screens, one of the best gaming set of keyboard and mouse, and some game's stuff such as figure actions. For the second desk, I will put only two medium computer screen, gaming keyboard and 2 speakers. Audio system is an important thing, so I'll put some four speakers in each corners of the room. In front of the main desk there will be a very comfortable chair, so I can feel comfort when I play my game. For the computers, I'll put the best gaming computer under and on the left side of the main desk and for the second computer is under and on the right side of the second desk. I'll also put the subwoofer under the second desk, beside the computer. To make this room more looks like a gamer room, I'll put  some posters on the wall of my room. I usually take a long of time to play a game, so I'll put a refrigerator at the opposite of the door. So if I want to eat something, I don't need to go out. With those good things in that room, that will be the most comfortable place in my house and I really want to have a room like that.

Share the Happiness with Hugs

There was a man holding a sign about offering free hugs for everyone. He was walking in the downtown and offering free hugs for everyone. But at the beginning of this video, some people tried to keep a distance with him because people might think that he was insane or else. But the situation was changed when an elder woman come to him and asked to get a hug from him and the man was hugging old woman gladly. Many people pay an attention to the man when he was hug the old woman, and after that some people wanted to get a free hugs from the man too. Everybody whether male, female, old and young wanted to get a free hugs from the man and that was so sweet. In the middle of this video, the event "Free Hugs" that conducted by the man was banned by the police.The man tried to explain what was the purpose of the event. After that, the police allowed him to continued his event and the other people started to do the same. They give a free hugs to everyone and during the event, the man give a signature list to the people who wanted to get a free hug and supported this event. Finally, the target of signature was reached. 10 thousand signatures was reached by the man and then to celebrate the success of his action, many people give free hugs and hugging each other. That was so sweet because this video wants to tell us that it's important to share our love to the other, share the happiness to the other people and respect to each other. At last, this video is so great and of course it was so sweet.

Here is the link for the video. Please enjoy.

Free Hugs Campaign

Unforgotten Moment

I’ll never forget the day when I successfully passed the test to get into college. In that day, that was an ordinary day as always, but it was also the day that the announcement regarding the passing test was announced. I was not too exited in that day because I was so pessimist that I could pass the test and get to study in my favorite university. So because of that I ignored the announcement that posted in internet. I only watched a TV from the morning to spend my free time, and then browsed some information in the internet. When I browsed in the internet, I was a quite wonder about the announcement of the test. So, I decided to look the announcement just to satisfy my curiosity. Because I didn't know the site yet, I tried to search it in Google. It wasn't taking a long time to get the site, and then I entered to the site. After that, I was very nervous and wondered that I succeed or not. To ease me in finding my name, I asked my brother to help me because there were so many names in the list. We were kept searching and finally I found my name written in the list. I was very happy and couldn't believe what my eyes have seen. After that, I told my parents about that good news and they looked so happy too. That day was a historic day for me and unforgotten moment for me.