Teenager Love
That was
an ordinary day in my school. As usual, I did my routines as a high school
student such as study and go to the canteen with my friends when the bell
ringed. That was really common routines that I did. I didn't expect something
special would come, but in fact there was something really special happened at
that day. That was the day when I met my first love.
The story
started when the first class at that day ended. My friends and I went to the
school's canteen to have our breakfast. As usual, we laughed together when one
of my friends told us a joke. The situation was so crowded at that time, but we
didn't care and just continued our conversation. I didn't really care about the
situation around me even though someone called my name. But suddenly I was
speechless when someone touched my shoulder and saw a pretty girl asked for my
help to take a bottle of soda from the refrigerator. I was really speechless at
that time because I was so amazed with her and because of that too I forgot to
ask her name when she went away. I was so curious with her because that was the
first time i saw her in my school. So started from that, I wanted to know more
about her.
Next day
after school. I went to the parking lot. I was thinking about the girl that i
met the day before and fortunately I met her again at the parking lot when she
tried to take her motorcycle. That was really awkward. I wanted to greet her
but I was really nervous. I thought that I won't lose this chance, so i tried
to braced myself and greet her first. With a pretty smile she greeted me back
then I asked her name. Her name is Julia and she is from Gianyar. After
introducing ourselves to each other, then I had a quite long conversation with
her. That was really awkward because our conversation was so clumsy. I tried to
ask her phone number and then I also gave her mine. Since that moment, I had a
good relationship with her.
For
several days, We always communicated with each other, and day by day I felt
we had become closer than before even though we only communicated by
phone. Next day at school, I met her again for the third time. I met her in
front of my classroom and I tried to greet her nicely. After that, she smiled
to me then she came closer to me. We had a very excited conversation. We talked
about everything and there was no more clumsiness between us. I was so happy at
that time.
After that
moment, we were getting closer and closer. I knew a lot about her and she also
knew me well. We often went together and spent our free time together. And we
were no longer as a friend, but more than that.
Loves make your life become "extraordinary" . Well, I know that you have hard work for this writing. But I still confused with your thesis statement, because I couldn't find your thesis statement clearly. Good job Tuadi :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot angga for your comment. I've revise it. i hope i do it right now. thanks
DeleteSo Adi Wira, how’s your relationship now? Did you still keep in touch with Julia?
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice girl Adi, you also describe her with a clear picture. Your content is good, but I found a very small mistake in your essay paragraph. You have to write “i” in the capital letter right? I just want to remind you. hehe
Nice writing Adi, I’m glad to read your love story.