Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Writing III, Narrative Text : "Teenager Love"

Teenager Love

That was an ordinary day in my school. As usual, I did my routines as a high school student such as study and go to the canteen with my friends when the bell ringed. That was really common routines that I did. I didn't expect something special would come, but in fact there was something really special happened at that day. That was the day when I met my first love.

The story started when the first class at that day ended. My friends and I went to the school's canteen to have our breakfast. As usual, we laughed together when one of my friends told us a joke. The situation was so crowded at that time, but we didn't care and just continued our conversation. I didn't really care about the situation around me even though someone called my name. But suddenly I was speechless when someone touched my shoulder and saw a pretty girl asked for my help to take a bottle of soda from the refrigerator. I was really speechless at that time because I was so amazed with her and because of that too I forgot to ask her name when she went away. I was so curious with her because that was the first time i saw her in my school. So started from that, I wanted to know more about her.

Next day after school. I went to the parking lot. I was thinking about the girl that i met the day before and fortunately I met her again at the parking lot when she tried to take her motorcycle. That was really awkward. I wanted to greet her but I was really nervous. I thought that I won't lose this chance, so i tried to braced myself and greet her first. With a pretty smile she greeted me back then I asked her name. Her name is Julia and she is from Gianyar. After introducing ourselves to each other, then I had a quite long conversation with her. That was really awkward because our conversation was so clumsy. I tried to ask her phone number and then I also gave her mine. Since that moment, I had a good relationship with her.

For several days, We always communicated with each other, and day by day I felt  we had become closer than before even though we only communicated by phone. Next day at school, I met her again for the third time. I met her in front of my classroom and I tried to greet her nicely. After that, she smiled to me then she came closer to me. We had a very excited conversation. We talked about everything and there was no more clumsiness between us. I was so happy at that time.


After that moment, we were getting closer and closer. I knew a lot about her and she also knew me well. We often went together and spent our free time together. And we were no longer as a friend, but more than that. 

3 comments:

  1. Loves make your life become "extraordinary" . Well, I know that you have hard work for this writing. But I still confused with your thesis statement, because I couldn't find your thesis statement clearly. Good job Tuadi :)

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    1. Thanks a lot angga for your comment. I've revise it. i hope i do it right now. thanks

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  2. So Adi Wira, how’s your relationship now? Did you still keep in touch with Julia?
    What a nice girl Adi, you also describe her with a clear picture. Your content is good, but I found a very small mistake in your essay paragraph. You have to write “i” in the capital letter right? I just want to remind you. hehe
    Nice writing Adi, I’m glad to read your love story.

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