My
classmate is I Gede Wisnu Bayu Temaja. He comes from Tabanan. He arrived
in the Buleleng last year to study in Undiksha University at English Education
Department. He lives in his boarding house at Jln. Abimanyu No.18, Singaraja.
He was born in Tabanan on February 13th 1994 and now he is 19 years
old. He is single person and his religion is Hinduism. He studies at English
Education Department because he wants to become an English teacher in the
future and he also wants to become entrepreneurs. He has a lot of hobbies, such
as read some books, and playing game. Besides that, he also likes to do sport
such as Futsal and Badminton. On weekends, his activities is goes to his
hometown, spend his time with his family and his friend, and goes to the beach
sometime. He has a big hope for his future such as want to master English and
be a successful entrepreneur. He is very obedient student in my class, he’s
easy-going person and I am glad to be his classmate.
"his activities is goes to his hometown......."
ReplyDeleteyou should use to be "are" because your subject is plural :)
Eh... thanks Dhina.. :)
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ReplyDeletein the first sentence ' My classmate’s name is ' i think it can put off ( 's) in classmate's become classmate.. because there is already to be (is)
ReplyDeletewell,,good paragraph but i'd like to ask you
ReplyDeleteIf Undiksha University or Ganesha University of Education ???
uhmm -uhmm..one more, it is not good enough if you just translete from bahasa Indonesi to English nly, without examine the grammar itself..
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this is what i want from you...
Deletethx for the comment angga..
I'll revise it and post it soon..
but which one is correct? Undiksha University or Ganesha University of Education?
what do you think?